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PostSubject: Dinner at `eight <3 A story <3   Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:06 am

As a new member of the DG family, I'd like to share something special and close to my heart. This is one of my few stories that I wrote during my so called "spillings of the heart". I hope you like it as much as i enjoyed writing it Embarassed

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"Ang tagal naman.."

Naiinip na ako at hilong talelong na sa gutom, he’s still not here.

"One hour late na ah!"

"Sister naman kasi sabi ko sayo mauna na tayo, wala na tayong aabutan don! Tinawagan mo na ba si papa Jake?"

"Oo kaya! lowbat n nga ako kakatawag e!"

I glanced at Pat fixing his eyeliner, sayang ‘tong lalakeng to. Ke`gwapo gwapo bumaluktot. Sabay tawa ko.

"Nako bakla pinagnanasaan mo nanaman ako! Rape! Raape! Bwahaha"

Natatawa akong tinakpan ang bibig niya.

"Eskandalosa ka talaga!"

"Eh pano ba naman at-- ay eto na pala ang bongga! Jakey! nako bakit ngayon ka lang!" Patakbong lumapit si Jake

"Sorry ngayon lang ako, kanina pa ba kayo?"

"Ay obvious ba!"

Pat said with the Madam Claudia look on his face.

"Si Gen kasi e, nagpasama sa G4 akala ko saglit lang nagbrowse pa ng books e.."

"Gen Gen Gen Gen..puro ka gen papa Jakey!"

"Pat naman.."

"Ay nako nasira na`ng mood ko sayo! Let's go mga bakla sayang ang gabi - dala ko ang korona!"

As if I swallowed my tongue I kept to myself till we were halfway through Jake’s car,

Eh kaya naman pala..kasama nanaman si Gen. Yang babaeng yan namumuro na talaga sakin e. Kakalbuhin ko na yan.

"Andy, ano sama ka pa ba? Tumawag si Rap nandun daw si HELGA mo hahaha"

I tried to fake a smile,

"Really? OMG OMG OMG Patrocinyo! Ayusan mo ko! Si HELGA nandon!"

Sumagot si Pat while fixing his mascara

"Bakla maganda ka na. Akin ang korona."

and let out a chuckle.

Jake pulled over Bianx's house, ang ingay. ang daming tao. Hinanap ko agad si Bianx...spotted!

"Bakla!"

Bianx smiled - she was drunk - actually they're all drunk.

"DUUDE! bakit ngayon lang kayo? hahaha"

I looked at her

"bakit lasing ka na?! haha"

I said mocking her.

"LECHE! haha pumasok na kayo don - may food! Maubusan kayo ni rap! hahaha"

and she went back to her circle by the steps.



"DUUDE! whaddup?"

Rap said with a dumb look on his face. Jake and I looked at each other and yelled;

"DRUNK!"

And we were laughing our *** off.

Jake offered to get me a punch,

"Okay lang ano ka ba, i'll come with."

Mahirap lumusot ha, masikip. Thank God wala ang mom and dad ni bianx, kundi baka maging pabasa to.

Jake handed me a glass of punch, i took a sip

"Ang tapang,"

I said with my Sukang Silver Swan face.

Biniro niya pa ako,

"Ikaw natatapangan?! huwaw! ahahaha"

God. He is so fine.. I wish he was mine.. *SNAP OUT OF IT!* and i doozed back to reality.

"Ungas! ahaha teka nga, have you seen my HELGA anywhere?"

come on! magreact ka!

"I think nakita ko siya sa may kitchen,"

Manhid

"oh ok, i'll go say hi nyaha!"

Walking away with my fake grin. I walked down the stairs and saw blurs of faces. It's really not my night.



I can't take it anymore...but i can't say anything.. he's so happy with Gen..and I don't want to ruin that for him.

"Andy!"

Someone's calling me -

"Oh hey Mike, didn't know you were coming"

Si HELGA pala,

"Kahit ako hindi ko alam na pupunta ako e, haha hinila lang ako nila Jake"

Ano daw? nila Jake? funny he didn't mention that.

"Oo, jake told me to come. He called me kanina, nasa G4 daw siya ah."

He called Mike yet didn't answer any of my calls. JERK.

"ha? ah talaga? oo nga nasabi niya nga. So kanina pa kayo?"

Ask questions para kunyari interesado.

"Kind of, hinihintay kaya kita"

Ano daw? ay ay ay..am I hearing things or was he flirting with me?

"Ano?"

I said with my pa-virgin tone.

"I said, I was waiting for you, akala ko nga di ka na pupunta,"

Mejo kinilig naman ako sa mokong na to - errr pati ba naman dito! Cellphone parin hawak mo Jake! Ano ba yang Gen na yan SANGGOL?! Bilhan ko siya ng yaya e! "uh..Andy?"

Snap back to reality

"sorry..may naalala lang,"

"ok lang, nagulat ka ba?"

MEJO

"hindi naman ahaha"

He offered me chippy

"Have some, uh..I wanted to ask you something sana"

Scooping a handful of chippy

"hmmhmm.."

Chewing.

"Are you going out with anyone right now?"

Nasamid ako don.

"Ha? what made you ask that?"

He looked at me,

"because I want to have dinner with you"

Nagblush naman ako don

"uhm..Mike, you're a great guy and all..but pwede bang pagisipan ko muna?"

His eyes fell on the floor.

"Think away Andy, I'm in no hurry"

I can't handle thin air, I have enough of that already.

"uh - Mike punta lang ako don ha"

He nodded.



It's getting late,

it's 2 A.M na.

I need to go home na, nasan na ba si Patrocinyo//

THERE.

"Pat..i need to go na.. tara na bakla.."

he looked at me - bangag na ang gaga.

Teka - where's Jake?

I am not going home alone ng alas-dos ng madaling araw.

Checked the bathroom - wala.

Checked upstairs - wala.

Check the - ayun..

Anong gngwa nito sa labas?

"Jake,"

hindi lumingon

"-nong gusto mong gawin ko Hon? eh hindi nga ako makaalis. Alam mo naman sila Andy"

I cleared my throat,

lumingon si Jake

"Alam mo Jake, wag mo kaming sisihing mga kaibigan mo kung hindi namen makasundo yang bitch of a girlfriend mo!"

sabay walk out.

I can hear Gen's voice screaming.

f**k!

Teka - eh ano naman ngayon!

keberberidad!

I was halfway up the steps when Jake caught up.

"Ano bang problema mo Andy?"

naniningkit ang mata ko jake!

"Anong problema ko? anong problema niyo ng girlfriend mo!"

Hawak parin ang fone niya.

"Bakit naman sinasali mo nanaman si Gen Andy?!"

sinisigawa niya na ako ngayon!

"abba! sinisigawan mo na ako ngayon Jake? wow..wow talaga!"

I'm getting pretty emotional –

“Pano ba naman ako hindi magtataas ng boses Andy eh kung ano ano nang lumalabas sa bibig mo,"

Ah ganon? sa bibig ko pala ha-

"Well you had no problem with my mouth whatsoever last month when you kissed me!" oh no.

did i just say that out loud?

"Andy.."

Palapit siya sakin

"No Jake, don't. Not again. I've had enough of this. Enough of you. I can't always be your safety net. Gusto ko ring sumaya."

and i walked away.

Pumunta ako sa taas..

I cried my eyes out.

I heard Jake's car drove away - tanginang yon iniwan talaga ako!

Pano ako uuwi nito gabi na masyad-- before i knew it Mike was in front of me

"Coffee, Ms. Andy?"

He was holding a mug of coffee and a pillow with a faint smile on his face "Mike…sorry...don't worry I'm ok"

He handed me the coffee and fluffed the pillow

"Okey ka dyan, I heard you and Jake - kung ikaw ako hindi ako magiging ok"

Those words...for some reason bumigat ang puso ko..

I can't hold back the tears anymore..

it won't stop…

He sat beside me habang binigay sakin yung pillow..

"now Ms. Andy...about dinner.."
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PostSubject: Re: Dinner at `eight <3 A story <3   Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:07 am

^ may part 2 ba e2??
haha..parang novel..
haha..

may talent ^^ ganda
naman story e.
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PostSubject: Re: Dinner at `eight <3 A story <3   Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:56 am

Ohhh... O_O Sad...

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